Every year, many people move to large cities to live and work. This is one of the biggest problems in the world today. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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immigration to bigger

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to pursue a better life is worldwide. For years,

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phenomenon had been viewed as a positive act that could bring a great number of young workers to the

cities

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, but recently people are taking a fresh look at it. It is argued that moving to bigger

cities

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can cause concerning problems for the world. I am completely in agreement with the above-said view. The following essay will overlook two rationales that support my idea.

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, the growing

population

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of big

cities

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is becoming out of control and the provided facilities are not sufficient to serve

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population

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.

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, the number of available houses

are

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not enough to respond

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inquiry.

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, a great number of small flats with

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lower quality are being constructed to

accomodate

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accommodate

them in a short period.

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, the social facilities of those neighbourhoods were designed for little

population

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and changing those facilities to respond

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new

population

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puts

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great pressure on the government which means financial

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burden

not only for the government but

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for the

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taxpayers

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tax payers

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taxpayers

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.

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, the small

towns

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and the occupations that were established in those areas are

demolishing

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.

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,

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agriculture is usually the main career in small

towns

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which has faced

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lack of human resources due to

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immigration.

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farmers mean less harvest and

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the danger of the families'

bankrupcy

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bankruptcy

.

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living in the bigger

cities

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might be preferable to staying in the small

towns

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due to the

existance

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existence

of more potential opportunities, it suffers from the disadvantages that threaten the

villages

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existence and their settlers.

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, the decrease

of

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their

productions

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might even cause a worldwide famine. To sum up,

pursueing

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pursuing

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opportunities in the larger urban areas and leaving the small regions are not

necesserily

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necessarily

means a better life. I believe that the lack of sufficient social services and the possibility of

destruction

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the destruction

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of small businesses in

towns

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negate the positive consequence of

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phenomenon.