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Details of politicians’ private lives should not be published in newspapers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#politicians’ #lives #newspapers
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In the current age of the internet, everything and everyone is online, because of
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, it is almost impossible to keep any
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 private, especially when society is hell-bent on peeping inside one's life. The popularity of common people's vlogs is a testament to the fact that the general public is quite curious to know what happens in one's life.
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, things get complicated when the person of interest is a politician or a well-known face, a celebrity if you will. Curiosity piques and somehow there is no
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 thing as a boundary. Every day we see photos or videos of
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 encounters where no prior consent has been taken. Breach of
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 of
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 extent is mentally straining for a person who is the centre of attention. It
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 sends a wrong message to the public that it is ok to invade somebody else's privacy. When we talk about politicians, the same principle should be applied. Their private lives must remain private,
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, I would like to add that being public servant,
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 like their accumulated wealth and taxes must be shared with the public.
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 can
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 in turn make the public trust the politician.
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, no one needs to know who the person is married to or who they are dating. But what have they been doing for the betterment of the public is surely something that must be discussed and shared. There should be a clear distinction between what is private
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 and what is public
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. Hiding the fact that a politician got some businessman's backing to run the election campaign surely sways the election result and
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 is a dishonest way to run for a public post. Clarity and general awareness are necessary.
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Addresses the task effectively, establishing the distinction between private and public information for politicians.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • intrusion
  • accountability
  • transparency
  • sensationalism
  • privacy
  • public interest
  • collateral damage
  • precedent
  • responsible journalism
  • exploitation
  • democratic processes
  • media culture
  • balance
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