Some people believe that eventually all jobs will be done by artificial intelligence robots. What is your opinion?

As
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of technology grows, many useful products have been invented. One of the greatest inventions is the artificial intelligence robot. They freed our
human’s
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hands. Additional, they
also
have higher productivity than human beings.
However
, artificially robots cannot replace occupations that required human interaction, knowledge, engagement and etc. In
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essay, I will talk about my opinions. Nowadays, A.I. technology is already very mature. Robots can
work
in a dangerous environment, avoid accidents,
work
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a longer span and etc.
For instance
, when there is radiation in the
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, robotic automation is the ideal solution because they can
work
automatically without getting illness and injuries.
Furthermore
, breaks are not necessary for them. They can
work
twenty- four hours a day and seven days a week without any rest. All they need is electricity to supply them.
On the other hand
, they
also
have many flaws,
such
as lack of emotion, lack of creativity and etc.
Therefore
, they cannot
work
as a psychologist.
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job required empathy in order to help the clients out of
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predicament.
Moreover
, they can only
work
for the programmed or given instruction. It will not think out of the box like
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human
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and it might give unexpected output. In conclusion, there are still some jobs
cannot
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replace by A.I. robots. They need improvement on interaction, emotion and creativity. As long as these weaknesses
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improved,
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could be a major part of
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society.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Artificial Intelligence (AI)
  • Automation
  • Workplace automation
  • Human intuition
  • Job displacement
  • Collaborative robots (Cobots)
  • Skill adaptation
  • Ethical considerations
  • Economic implications
  • Fully automated workforce
  • Human-machine collaboration
  • Technological advancements
  • Creative industries
  • Empathy
  • Socio-economic impact
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