You have a friend who lives abroad. You have decided to apply for a course at one of the colleges in his city. Write to your friend explaining Tell them about the college and the course and why you want to do it. Ask for their help to find accommodation if you get admission to the course.
Dear Madhu, I hope everything is fine with you and your family. I’d like to let you know that I intend to engage in a professional course in Masters in your city. I’m hoping that I could get some help regarding
few
details or additional information about the course offered at the reputable university in London. As you are aware, ICorrect article usage
a few
choose
the Harvard University in London after reviewing the list of universities. Following my Wrong verb form
chose
under-graduate
course, I thought of pursuing my Correct your spelling
undergraduate
post graduation
in Environmental Add a hyphen
post-graduation
studies
and Harvard has the best facilities and lecturers that it can provide. Capitalize word
Studies
Because
Correct word choice
This
this
route has provided a new development happening in the country and there are opportunities that seems
promising in terms of future prospects. I would appreciate your assistance in helping me find Change the verb form
seem
an
accommodation near the universityCorrect article usage
apply
,
if my application gets accepted by them. I can suit myself in a single bedroom flat with basic enmities like a single bed, a bathroom a study table and a bed which can used when I have parents come to meet me. I would be grateful for your help. Remove the comma
apply
And
Let’s catch up sometime and I treat you Correct word choice
apply
with
a coffee. Best wishes, NithishaChange preposition
to
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Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.