Instructions Read the question below and write a letter. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words. You recently stayed with a childhood friend for a few days. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: Thank your friend for letting you stay with them. refer to something enjoyable that you did while staying with him/her invite your friend to visit you

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Dear Rahul, I hope you are well and in good spirits as you receive

this

note. Please convey my best wishes to the entire family. I'm writing to express my gratitude for the perplexing experience we had during my stay.

To begin

with, binge-watching Netflix with Maggie and a cup of coffee in hand reminded me of our school days. Visiting the campus was a fantastic experience,

while

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we were able to remember those carefree days when there was no pressure to work hard in order to make ends meet.

Furthermore

, I'd like to express my sincere gratitude to your mother for the delectable Indian cuisine she prepares at home. The delectable experience was fantastic,

as well as

I envisioned myself in India, spending precious time with my family at the dinner table,

sharing

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and sharing

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our favourite meals.

Finally

, I strongly urge you to visit Canada in the future months with your entire family, including your cat. It will be enjoyable, and we will go on numerous adventure trips,

such

as visiting Niagara

as well as

museums and many more. With love and warm regards, Nithisha

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7Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Grammar mistakes
 

1 paragraphs

185 words

6.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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