A increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teacher are living their own poorer countries to work in develpoed countries. What problems does this cause ? What solutions can you suggest to deal with problems.

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It is considered that high skilled workers are migrating to
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developed countries
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of living in their own developing nations.
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its causes
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as low paid salaries and poor living standards and propose some solutions to alleviate
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. To commence with the, there are various reasons behind
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happening why highly educated
people
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do not give
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priority to spend life in their mother country. The most prominent one is that
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they are not receiving
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amount of their payment. To explain it, it is really hard to live the lavish
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standard
even they already did a lot of
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hard work
for getting jobs in
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of
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. For
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, a survey was conducted by the Education
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in
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India, they revealed that 50%
doctors
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are getting 40000 rupees salary per month which is not enough to
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their needs. To cope with
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,
government
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should give more importance to these
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people's
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who are
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for
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every nation by providing them better amenities as well as
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amount of money as a reward.
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,
unempolyment
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unemployment
is the main cause which
countributes
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contributes
contributed
to the
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of under-developed nations.
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, multi-
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talented
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people's
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people
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are not getting jobs which make them depressed
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moving their own land.
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, a headline of newspaper 'royal future', they revealed that highly-qualified individuals are suffering
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the
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health
aliments
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ailments
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due to
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not
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a chance in their own profession. To mitigate
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issue, legal
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authorities
should spend funds on the
contruction
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construction
of health
centeres
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centres
and education services, so that
people
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get
opportunity
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to do work which passion they have. In conclusion,
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there are some solid reasons which alluring professional to live their own nations,
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I reiterate that regime
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some steps to
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tackle
take
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issue, that will be
fruitfull
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fruitful
for society as well as
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the country
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