You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Some students work while studying. This often results in lacking time for education and constantly feeling under pressure. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? Write at least 250 words

Knowledge is an important part of life. Having formal

educations

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means that

Students

have

commited

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committed

to

do

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certain steps of learning in order to gain

knowledge

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the knowledge

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they seek. Enlisting

in formal

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informal

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institutions of

education

means that there is a cost to pay.

However

, Not all

people

have

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privileged

priviliged

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life to

fulfill

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fulfil

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the

tuitition

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tuition

so they have to work extra time that leisure time become scarce for them. For

students

that

needs

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to survive paying bills and daily needs, They have to do extra effort making side jobs, even in the irregular hours. I personally think that the reason for it is the lack of standard

education

cost and government incentive that

people

, especially the poor, have trouble

accessed

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higher

education

. We need

a

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apply

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very thorough

systems

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system

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that ensure all

of

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citizen

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the citizen

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can access better

education

. Government can start with posing a bill for schools or

college

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colleges

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to implement transparent and standard fees for

education

in

all

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region

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.Prioritizing the

teachers

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welfare and

students

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students'

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facilities would contribute

making

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safe

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a safe

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and approachable

place

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places

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for poor

people

. In conclusion, To facilitate

students

better in proper time studying and avoid constant feeling stressed, Government needs to implement better systems that really concerned about how

education

can easily

accessed

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by the

people

.