Some people feel that boarding schools (where students or pupils live at the school during the term) are an excellent option for children, while other people disagree for a number of reasons.

Sending their children to boarding school is a controversial subject for many people, some argue that it is a great choice for their children but others may contradict that opinion.
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essay will discuss both sides and I will state my mind that boarding
schools
are
beneficial
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and important chance for
students
for being well prepared for their forthcoming lives. Boarding
schools
have
a great deal of
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advantages for a pupil.
First
of all, it enables a child to utilize his free time with his peers and develop crucial communication and social skills which will impact his ultimate career as well as his future life in general.
Second
of all,
this
type of school always has a teacher to stay over as well to make sure that
students
are getting along well, and
this
may help a student to get a better discipline which
also
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helpful for his future career. Plus they can get assistance from their teacher anytime they want and
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positive
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effect on their
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works
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.
On the other hand
, boarding
schools
may have several downsides as well as upsides.
For instance
, since there will be a range of
students
from different age groups,
abusing
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of the younger
students
by senior ones might be encountered. Possible physical and/or psychological abuse of a child would of course leave
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lifetime
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to his life.
In addition
to that, when a kid lives away from their home and family for a long time, they possibly feel homesick and alone.
This
would eventually and inevitably affect their social aura and mood in a detrimental manner. In conclusion, it is obvious that boarding
schools
have many pros as well as cons. In my point of view, it would be better and much more beneficial for a student to choose boarding
schools
in terms of developing discipline, social skills and many other important skills which would be
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in their future careers.
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