Some people feel that boarding schools (where students or pupils live at the school during the term) are an excellent option for children, while other people disagree for a number of reasons.
Sending their children to boarding school is a controversial subject for many people, some argue that it is a great choice for their children but others may contradict that opinion.
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essay will discuss both sides and I will state my mind that boarding Linking Words
schools
are Use synonyms
beneficial
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a beneficial
students
for being well prepared for their forthcoming lives.
Boarding Use synonyms
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advantages for a pupil. Change the quantifier
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First
of all, it enables a child to utilize his free time with his peers and develop crucial communication and social skills which will impact his ultimate career as well as his future life in general. Linking Words
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of all, Linking Words
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type of school always has a teacher to stay over as well to make sure that Linking Words
students
are getting along well, and Use synonyms
this
may help a student to get a better discipline which Linking Words
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be
helpful for his future career. Plus they can get assistance from their teacher anytime they want and Change the verb form
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On the other hand
, boarding Linking Words
schools
may have several downsides as well as upsides. Use synonyms
For instance
, since there will be a range of Linking Words
students
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abusing
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by senior ones might be encountered. Possible physical and/or psychological abuse of a child would of course leave Use synonyms
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In addition
to that, when a kid lives away from their home and family for a long time, they possibly feel homesick and alone. Linking Words
This
would eventually and inevitably affect their social aura and mood in a detrimental manner.
In conclusion, it is obvious that boarding Linking Words
schools
have many pros as well as cons. In my point of view, it would be better and much more beneficial for a student to choose boarding Use synonyms
schools
in terms of developing discipline, social skills and many other important skills which would be Use synonyms
must have
in their future careers.Add a hyphen
must-have
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