Some people think foreign visitors should be charged more than local people when they visit the cultural and historical attractions in a country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is often said that some extra entry fee should be taken from the foreigners as

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to the local tourists, whenever they travel to any new nation for site seeing. While

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has certain benefits, I would argue that its demerits are more significant. There are some causes why outsiders have to pay more than the locals for tourist attractions. The

first

and foremost is that since a huge amount of money is being spent in maintaining these places and local people are already contributing

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it by giving tax from their incomes, travellers from other countries do not pay any taxes for visiting these cultural and historical attractions, and charging them more is

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way to recover

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mahal every year by the Indian government, and Indian people already contribute 90 million dollars via various taxes.

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, is asking foreign visitors more money has any negative impact? Certainly yes, It can impart a sense of inequality in their minds, which can lead to

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image of the country;

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, they would not recommend their friends to visit the same place. Not only it can lower the number of new tourists who wants to visit our country but

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decreases the income assimilates from them.

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who visits

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wall of china in 2022 is 20% less than its previous year, as they have increased the ticket cost of it by 100$. To recapitulate,

although

taking more funds from foreign travellers can be beneficial for the economy, it can exacerbate the image of any country.

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8Linking words
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0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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4 paragraphs

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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maintenance
preservation
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Include an introduction and conclusion

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