Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to cooperate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Opinions are divided on whether

children

ought to be motivated for competition or

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cooperation

corporation

. In my opinion, both of these attitudes are equally significant for

success

and achievements in life. I will discuss and analyze both sides of the argument in

this

essay, before reaching a reasoned conclusion. On the one hand, it is often believed by some that parents and teachers must teach

children

the importance of competition in life.

This

is imperative for victory and prosperity in their lives.

For instance

, in educational complexes, students can succeed, if they have competitive minds which are responsible for their strong determinations and ambitions.

This

mindset ensures

success

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because

this

encourages pupils to stand still in front of all hardships and troubles coming in the way of their goals. In the long run,

this

skill assists them in combating difficulties of achieving outstanding

success

in the employment market, which they are likely to encounter in the future for securing a good career.

On the other hand

, learning the skill of corporation is essential for

children

as it develops in them the sense of teamwork and helping humanity. Take sport, as an illustration,

children

learn how to play

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a part of a team in numerous games

such

as cricket and football. They realize that if they are united with their teammates, they can perform better.

This

also

aids in developing empathetic and careful behaviour for others.

As a result

, many

children

prefer doing charity or volunteering to benefit mankind.

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behavioural specialists say that if

children

are taught to cooperate in schools, they develop a sense of working to reduce the plight of others. In conclusion, the two sides of the argument, based on the idea of competitive and

cooporative

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cooperative

skills in

children

, have strong support. I believe that both of these are crucial for the

success

of

children

in their practical lives.