You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. Some universities now offer their courses on the Internet so that people can study online. Is this a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

Due to

the

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advanced technology,

delivery

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the delivery

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of formal education has become more accessible. Online courses are becoming more available to university students, which is a positive development because it offers convenience to part-time studying individuals and is more

cost efficient

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in the long run. Working students are often struggling with managing their work and study time but with the help of online classes, their life will get easier and more manageable.

This

mean

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that they could complete their

schoolworks

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schoolwork

school works

whenever they have free time

do

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so.

Although

academic

works

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work

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must be on the top priority list, it gives them a chance to take up a job and provide for their expenses to get by.

Thus

, people should use

this

modern way of teaching

for

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their advantage.

In addition

, acquiring knowledge at home means transporting to and from school are no longer necessary, which eliminates the cost of travel

fee

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and

making

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this

mode of teaching inexpensive. Not only that but

also

the rent for

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a dorm

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dorm

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dorms

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that is

typical for pupils that are studying far away from their home will be no longer needed.

For example

, when I took up a couple of online courses sometime

last

year, for a year, it only cost me thirty dollars to accumulate three credits from an adult learning program

which

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was introduced to me by my friend. It does not require me to be there nor rent a place closer to the establishment to finish my studies, making it cheap. In conclusion, there is no doubt that technology

have

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revolutionised our way of learning. With that thought, we should reap the benefits that come along with

this

such

as

conveniency

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convenience

and causing us to save more money that can be used for our future endeavours.