You are moving home. Write a letter to your neighbours to say goodbye to them and to thank them for their help during your stay. In your letter explain how they helped you say what you will miss the most about the area where you lived invite them to visit you at your new home.

Dear neighbours, I am writing

this

letter to express my gratitude, as I will have to move to a different city in a few days. When I

first

arrived here, I couldn't imagine that I was about to make friends for life. Many of you gave us a warm welcome and pies in our

first

days,

in addition

to always saying you would be available to help us. And indeed you were there, many times we had to stay with my mom in the hospital, you took care of my children. The energy and partnership of

this

neighbourhood here are what I am going to miss. Even during difficult situations, everyone is willing to help, which makes

this

place so special. I hope you continue to have

such

a good heart and treat all the neighbours as family members

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because that makes a huge difference. I would be more than glad to have all of you visiting my new home and soon I will send you an invitation to a party with the address. There is a beautiful garden with a pool, where the kids can have fun.

Besides

, you can stay for the weekend for us to remember the old times. Just wanted to say I have not enough words to express how thankful I am to have met you and I hope to see all of you soon! Best regards, Mariana

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0Word repetition
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8 paragraphs

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You are moving home. Write a letter to your neighbours to say goodbye to them and to thank them for their help during your stay. In your letter explain how they helped you say what you will miss the most about the area where you lived invite them to visit you at your new home.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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