Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

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modern scenario,many individuals tend to wear clothes according to their choices,but some individuals believe that it is easy to judge

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behaviour and culture by just seeing

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dressing sense.

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,I disaccord with

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statement.

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essay will go into better detail with my subject view. To embark on,I think,it is a personal matter as some

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do not like to carry suits and pyjamas.

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is because why some

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prefer to use jeans and T-shirts

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them feel very comfortable,yet

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society thinks that multitudes who prefer to follow the latest fashion are characterless as they have followed the foreign cultures.

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,many elder

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have complained about the youngster's dressing sense,

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they already are decided that nowadays teenagers have become shameless in terms of wearing short dresses.

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,not all individuals are good who are preferred to wear kurtas and suits,but many old

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think that they are good because they are wearing traditional dress,it is not correct as good behaviour and

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not come from clothes it only

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from our hearts. On another hand,there are many ways of judging

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's characteristics.

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,their natural habits like donating money to poor

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and taking care of senior citizens.

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,it is a deniable fact that many modern

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like film stars love to help needy ones

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we can say about their culture and

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,nowadays,it is very difficult to

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for aged

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will take

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to protect them,

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we can

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say that

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are good or bad. To conclude,there are ample reasons why I

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view as there are many ways to determine

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an individual's

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character

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and tradition in terms of their helping nature,but we can not decide their

character

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from dressing sense as it is a personal choice of each and every person.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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309 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

attire
fashion trends
individuality
first impressions
designer labels
social status
cultural appropriation
dress codes
traditional garments
sartorial choices
symbolism in clothing
cultural identity
expression of self
global fashion industry
cultural integration

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Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

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Many things that used to be done in the home by hands are now being done by machines. Does this development bring more advantages or disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

Do we have to plan for future or stay focused on our present what is your opinion and why ? provide example to support your stand.