Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
In
this
modern scenario,many individuals tend to wear clothes according to their choices,but some individuals believe that it is easy to judge individual's
behaviour and culture by just seeing Correct article usage
an individual's
them
dressing sense.Change the pronoun
their
However
,I disaccord with this
statement.This
essay will go into better detail with my subject view.
To embark on,I think,it is a personal matter as some persons
do not like to carry suits and pyjamas.Replace the word
people
This
is because why some people
prefer to use jeans and T-shirts make
them feel very comfortable,yet Fix the infinitive
to make
the
society thinks that multitudes who prefer to follow the latest fashion are characterless as they have followed the foreign cultures.Correct article usage
apply
For instance
,many elder people
have complained about the youngster's dressing sense,therefore
they already are decided that nowadays teenagers have become shameless in terms of wearing short dresses.Moreover
,not all individuals are good who are preferred to wear kurtas and suits,but many old people
think that they are good because they are wearing traditional dress,it is not correct as good behaviour and character
not come from clothes it only come
from our hearts.
On another hand,there are many ways of judging Change the verb form
comes
people
's characteristics.Firstly
,their natural habits like donating money to poor people
and taking care of senior citizens.For example
,it is a deniable fact that many modern people
like film stars love to help needy ones interms
of giving money to destitute Correct your spelling
in terms
people
for buying meals,In this
way
we can say about their culture and Add a comma
,way
character
.Secondly
,nowadays,it is very difficult to crossing
Replace the word
cross
road
for aged Fix the agreement mistake
roads
people
,therefore
if people
will take dare
to protect them,Add an article
the dare
a dare
then
we can also
say that people
are good or bad.
To conclude,there are ample reasons why I am disagree
with Change the verb form
disagree
this
view as there are many ways to determine individual's
Correct article usage
an individual's
character
and tradition in terms of their helping nature,but we can not decide their character
from dressing sense as it is a personal choice of each and every person.Submitted by anushachenna15 on
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