More and more families are choosing fast food over home-cooked meals. What are the reasons for this and how can they be addressed?

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In the modern world, some
people
prefer to eat outside, because it cooks fast and costs cheaper
while
cooking at
home
. Most families may work
whole
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day and do not have enough time, or they think that ordering
delivery
fast
food
is easier
while
cooking at
home
and shopping for groceries for cooking.
This
is mainly because of the lack of free time. There
are
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number
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of solutions that should be implemented to deal with cooking at
home
. One of the most contingent reasons for
the
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choosing fast
food
is comfort.
That is
why some
people
called fast
food
- comfort
food
. It is comfortable to go to
McDonalds
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Mcdonald's
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and order a burger, french fries and coke. Fast
food
prepared
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with
flavor
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enhancers which
makes
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food
more tasty and wrapped in paper. There is no need to wash dishes when
customer
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a customer
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orders
delivery
. But it is not healthy.
For example
, there are a lot of
people
who become fat and unhealthy after eating fast
food
. Some possible solutions to
this
problem are ordering
delivery
groceries and preparing healthy
food
, making time management
such
as preparing ready-to-cook-
food
.
For example
, in the USA works
the
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company named Hello Fresh
which
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made a system of
delivery
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groceries with recipes and instructions. It is cheaper than ordering prepared
food
, and
people
who cook at
home
know what they are eating.
Although
preparing
food
at
home
makes a whole family closer
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In conclusion, we can significantly lessen eating fast
food
by using systems
such
as Hello Fresh and be healthy and strong.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • On-the-go lifestyle
  • Nutritional value
  • Home-cooked
  • Health consequences
  • Obesity epidemic
  • Meal prep
  • Time management
  • Culinary skills
  • Processed foods
  • Dietary habits
  • Food marketing
  • Value meals
  • Economic factors
  • Lifestyle diseases
  • Cultural shifts
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