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In the past people used more formal and long expressions to communicate with each other. Nowadays, we use fewer words and are more informed. Why is this happening? Use examples and specific details to explain your answer.

In recent years it's been observed that
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 are using informal ways of
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 I will be discussing the main reasons for
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 phenomenon.
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 with, In the past 50 ,years there has been a boom in the sector of technology and information which made
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 with one another much faster and easier.
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, going back half a century ago
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 used to communicate only through lengthy formal letters and posting and delivering it took a considerable amount of time . But nowadays
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 use emails that deliver messages within seconds.
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, due to
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's hectic ,schedules
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 need a way of
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 that is fast and convenient and since necessity is the mother of the invention many quick forms of
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 have been invented
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 as wattsap . skip , messenger . All of
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 has led to
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 becoming less formal . In conclusion, our
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 nowadays has become short and crisp because of the advancement of technology and
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's busy schedules .

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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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