Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There are those who believe that the amount of money

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celebrities

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in comparison with other relevant

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is completely understandable in our society nowadays, while the alternative stance argues that

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a situation is extremely unjustified. The purpose of

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argument and

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I will give my own perspective on the matter. On one hand, there are many who agree with the high wage paid to

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stars.

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is because the sport has been used to entertain people, which makes these professionals celebrities, and

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, more money is given to them to create entertainment.

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, most of the capital earned by

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players

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is not from their

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, but from brands that see them as models and faces to their campaigns. To illustrate

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, many

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at the end of the game put hats or clothes on to give interviews after games, where the logo of famous brands are displayed. In

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way,

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are being paid to promote products. In spite of these considerations, it is possible to make the opposing case. It is advocated that

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stars do not truly contribute to our society when compared to other

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.

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is due to the fact that other

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as doctors are able to save people’s lives, and teachers who create thinkers in our community, earn far less than

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players

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point is that the high

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create an illusion of a bright future for the young generation, which might decide to play

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of going to school. A particularly good example here is the number of children who go to soccer tests aiming to become famous soccer

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. In conclusion, I believe that both arguments have merits. On balance,

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, it is my opinion that the amount paid to

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celebrities is completely justified.

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is because it is my firm belief that they promote good entertainment in our lives, and giving them higher

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do not influence the

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of other

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, as brands are somehow responsible for part of

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money.