Some people think that schools should select students according to their academic abilities, while others believe that it is better to have students with different abilities studying together. Discuss both views and state your own opinion.

A part of the community opines that schools should select youngsters according to their academic achievements.
However
, another part opposes
this
fact by claiming ,it is better to allow
students
with multiple
abilities
to study together .
although
, when young
students
with a good academic background studying together can increase their
knowledge
by stimulation , it can be negatively affected their minds as well .
On the other hand
, when
students
with multiple
abilities
are grouped together they can share their
abilities
.
however
,
this
writer believes, that
both
these
views
have pros and cons and we have to select the ideal way very carefully.
To begin
with , when we consider the young generation with high academic
knowledge
, most often they are selected by competitive exams that have been conducted when they are at a very young age .
However
, they may develop competition with each other at
such
a young age and when they are grouped together ,
this
battle may poring out and lead to stimulation of each individual for
further
study . Unfortunately , some
students
may develop some mental problems
such
as depression with
this
competition .
For instance
, a recent study conducted by Oxford University has found , 55% of
students
with high academic
knowledge
who were placed in schools with academic targets have suffered from depression after competitive exams conducted by these schools .
On the other hand
, when the youngsters with different
abilities
come together , they can share their different pieces of
knowledge
with each other.
for example
,
students
with good academic
abilities
may not have sports talents and kids with
both
these talents may not have the ability to sing .
Hence
,when they place together , they can share their
knowledge
with each other and uplift their different
abilities
.
However
, due to lack of stimulation, they may not have the chance to go deep into their own
abilities
. In conclusion ,
although
people try to opine positively on
both
views
of placing
students
with high academic performances keep together and
students
with different
abilities
keep together, there are advantages and disadvantages on
both
these
views
.
however
, considering
both
these
views
,
this
writer opines that , we have to consider
both
pros and cons before we make a final decision .
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