Some people think that schools should select students according to their academic abilities, while others believe that it is better to have students with different abilities studying together. Discuss both views and state your own opinion.
A part of the community opines that schools should select youngsters according to their academic achievements.
However
, another part opposes this
fact by claiming ,it is better to allow students
with multiple abilities
to study together . although
, when young students
with a good academic background studying together can increase their knowledge
by stimulation , it can be negatively affected their minds as well . On the other hand
, when students
with multiple abilities
are grouped together they can share their abilities
. however
, this
writer believes, that both
these views
have pros and cons and we have to select the ideal way very carefully.
To begin
with , when we consider the young generation with high academic knowledge
, most often they are selected by competitive exams that have been conducted when they are at a very young age . However
, they may develop competition with each other at such
a young age and when they are grouped together ,this
battle may poring out and lead to stimulation of each individual for further
study . Unfortunately , some students
may develop some mental problems such
as depression with this
competition . For instance
, a recent study conducted by Oxford University has found , 55% of students
with high academic knowledge
who were placed in schools with academic targets have suffered from depression after competitive exams conducted by these schools .
On the other hand
, when the youngsters with different abilities
come together , they can share their different pieces of knowledge
with each other. for example
, students
with good academic abilities
may not have sports talents and kids with both
these talents may not have the ability to sing . Hence
,when they place together , they can share their knowledge
with each other and uplift their different abilities
.However
, due to lack of stimulation, they may not have the chance to go deep into their own abilities
.
In conclusion , although
people try to opine positively on both
views
of placing students
with high academic performances keep together and students
with different abilities
keep together, there are advantages and disadvantages on both
these views
. however
, considering both
these views
, this
writer opines that , we have to consider both
pros and cons before we make a final decision .Submitted by mngldissanayaka on
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