the information about sales of Fairtrade labelled tea and pineapple between 2010 and 2015 in five various European countries.

The given tables illustrate the information about sales of Fairtrade labelled tea and pineapple between 2010 and 2015 in five various European countries. Overall, Austrian indicated the highest amount of pineapples sale in both two years and there was a small amount of tea selling of France in 2010,while its figure indicated an upward trend five years later. According to the table, in 2010,Austria represented the highest
number
of tea sales,with about 4
million
euros
,higher than that of the Netherland by one time. The figure rose steadily to 8
million
euros
in 2015.
Similarly
, the French selling rate increased dramatically from only 2.5
million
euros
in 2010 to 21
million
euros
in 2015.
Moreover
, there was a sharp increase in the
number
of Germany, Nederland and Norway, with the rate of 3
million
and 2.7
million
and 2
million
respectively. In terms of pineapples, there was an increase in all countries' sales,except Norway and Germany. Between 2010 and 2015, The
number
of Austrian grew significantly from 16
million
to 46
million
.
Likewise
, both French and Netherland experienced an upward trend , rising by 4.5
million
to 6.5
million
and increasing by 3.4
million
to 5
million
consecutively in the same period.
On the contrary
, the figure for Norway dropped by 0.8
million
to 2
million
in 2015 and the
number
of Germany fell by 1.1
million
to 1.9
million
five years passing.
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