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the information about sales of Fairtrade labelled tea and pineapple between 2010 and 2015 in five various European countries.

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The given tables illustrate the information about sales of Fairtrade labelled tea and pineapple between 2010 and 2015 in five various European countries. Overall, Austrian indicated the highest amount of pineapples sale in both two years and there was a small amount of tea selling of France in 2010,while its figure indicated an upward trend five years later. According to the table, in 2010,Austria represented the highest
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 of tea sales,with about 4
million
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euros
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,higher than that of the Netherland by one time. The figure rose steadily to 8
million
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euros
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 in 2015.
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, the French selling rate increased dramatically from only 2.5
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euros
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 in 2010 to 21
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euros
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 in 2015.
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, there was a sharp increase in the
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 of Germany, Nederland and Norway, with the rate of 3
million
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 and 2.7
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 and 2
million
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 respectively. In terms of pineapples, there was an increase in all countries' sales,except Norway and Germany. Between 2010 and 2015, The
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 of Austrian grew significantly from 16
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 to 46
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.
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, both French and Netherland experienced an upward trend , rising by 4.5
million
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 to 6.5
million
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 and increasing by 3.4
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 to 5
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 consecutively in the same period.
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, the figure for Norway dropped by 0.8
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 to 2
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 in 2015 and the
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 of Germany fell by 1.1
million
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 to 1.9
million
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 five years passing.

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