Many people belive that women make better parents than men and that is why they have the greater role in raising children in most societies . Others claim , that men are just as good as women at parenting

Undoubtedly, society thinks that
mother
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is a better person when it comes to
parenting
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process, while some people argue that
father
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has
similar
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a similar
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quality
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like
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mother
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a mother
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does
on
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taking care of their
kids
.
This
essay will explore both ideas and explain why I believe working together on raising children should be done by
women
and men together. On the one hand, it is an undeniable fact that
women
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raised to become a
mother
who is responsible
to
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their family.
Therefore
, they are familiar
to
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certain things that
related
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to household activities, including growing their children.
In addition
, men are supposed to go to
office
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the office
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for work while
women
is
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ordered to stay at home.
As a result
,
women
have more time with
kids
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which later builds a closer relationship with her son or daughter. I recall a moment when I was a teenager, I always went to my mom whenever I had an obstacle at school because I spent more time with her sharing my problems compared to my dad who worked
at
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the
other
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city.
On the other hand
, with the advance of technology where we can access information everywhere, men nowadays tend to do their
task
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at home rather than
office
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an office
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.
Therefore
, they are able to play their role as a
father
at home more than those who lived decades ago.
For instance
,
father
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the father
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can have a high-quality time with his
kids
in the morning by doing exercise or sports
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together because he does not have to commute to the office. By doing these kinds of activities regularly, man can
also
create a tight-bond of relationship with his
kids
, which is considered as good as woman. To sum up, I think debating on who do parenting better is in vain and better to put our focus on raising
kids
together. Because
mother
and
father
should work together and give their best effort on balancing the role of both in order to boost the de the development of growth of a child.
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