Health experts claim that walking is the best exercise. However, people are walking less on a daily basis. What has made it happen and how to deal with this? Write at least 250 words.

Health experts claim that walking is the best exercise. But why
people
are walking less on a daily basis? There are some reasons why
people
are less walking nowadays.
Firstly
,
people
are so busy with their business that they forget to take care of their health.
People
always
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in a rush every morning to go to work for earning money. They have only
ittle
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little
time for walking around the street or park.
Secondly
,
people
don't feel safe while walking on the roads or
pedestrian
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pedestrians
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.
This
is because
people
are driving rashly on the roads and some youngsters who
don;t
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have
license
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driving
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the car which could endanger the
people
who walk on the road.
Are
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there any way to encourage
people
to start walking more? The answer is yes. The most important way is that
people
have to be made aware of the potential benefits
from
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regular walking. There should be more
publication
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publications
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in
media
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about the benefit of walking
such
as for their brain, memory, blood pressure, and fitness.
Moreover
, the strict law must be implemented by the government on drink and drive and the
last
must redesign the city with proper pavements and pedestrian. Conclusion
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