Some students work while studying. This often results in lacking time for education and constantly feeling under pressure. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? Write at least 250 words

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lacking

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for education and feeling under pressure, some

students

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tend to

work

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while studying. I believe that the need for the

economy

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and the personal preference in expanding

work

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experience are the reasons

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issue while the solution of

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case will be elaborated more in the following paragraphs.

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terms of reasoning, the need for the

economy

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is one of some reasons why

students

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still have to

work

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while studying.

Students

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come from

different

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family

background

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. It would not become an issue for the

students

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from the rich, but for those who

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from

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less fortunate family, studying needs a lot of money, especially in

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era where the prices of everything is so high. To keep the hope of reaching

their

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better future,

students

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opt to sacrifice their

time

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to

work

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while studying. From the money they get after working, they spend it on school fees.

Usually

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they take a

part

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part-time

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time

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job in the evening

where

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the class has already finished, like working as a barista at

cafe

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the cafe

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,

a

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cleaning service at shops and so forth. Another possible

reasons

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of

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issue

is

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the preference

from

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student

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to expand their

work

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experience. As we know the term 'You Only Live Once', they will search

as

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many experiences as possible while they could. Knowledge and education

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not always derived from the educational institution but

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from the working world. It will be useful for their future as well.

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, there are some solutions I might offer, like the government

allowance

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for the less fortunate

student

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and the

time

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for leisure to reduce the stress after

work

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. The government must

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concern

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of

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situation and take a role

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giving

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allowance

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to

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a student

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student

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students

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with

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the economy

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economy

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crisis

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. With the proper

allowance

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given,

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the student

a student

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student

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students

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would be more

focus

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on studying rather than taking a

part

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part-time

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time

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job.

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, working while studying is not completely prohibited. But, they must be more conscious

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their mental health. Taking

a

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for a break and

have

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a

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leisure

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is one way to decrease the stress level. In conclusion, the need for the

economy

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and the preference to expand the experience cause the urgency from

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student

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students

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to

work

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while studying, but with a decent

allowance

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from the government and taking

a

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time

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for leisure would probably be great answers for

students

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to gain more focus on studying with less stress level.