Besides a lot of advantages, some people believe that the Internet creates many problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Write 250 words.

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being useful in many aspects of society, there are people who still believe that the

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causes problems.

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, personally, I strongly disagree with them, because they have not

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all the advantages that the

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brings and only take the drawbacks into account. A problem that

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primarily used by people who oppose that the

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's advantages

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outweigh

its disadvantages

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that it is easier now to spread negative

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compared to the pre-

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era. Hoax is an example of negative

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, which is now becoming a problem even

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have concerned about it. The other example is pornography,

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is now getting easier to be accessed without an age limitation

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if they know how to do it.

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, almost all of the drawbacks the

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may

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is not from the

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itself, but from its user. There are

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myriads

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there are

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billion of

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. It is the choice of the users which content they prefer to

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.

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,

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for

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internet

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not limited to

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, children

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can

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it freely nowadays. In

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case, the role of the adults is an important factor to supervise them in order to only have

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to the desired contents.

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, the advancement of technology is now making it possible for parents to continuously monitor their children's activities

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the

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and block

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unwanted sites. To conclude, as a type of

tools

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that its

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main purpose is for the wellbeing of humanity, the

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can be used for good or for bad purposes. It is our freedom to use it wisely.