In the future all cars ,buses and trucks will be driveless.The only people travalling inside these vehicles will be passengers . Do you think the advantages of driveless vehicle outweigh the disadvantages?

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that one day

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vehicles have no drivers. From now on, the drivers

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replaced by the automatic system which

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by advanced automation. From my point of view, there are both benefits and drawbacks from a perspective. In my opinion, there are many advantages of driverless in the future.

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, it will decrease the accidents that

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by human errors.

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human effectiveness could be wrong as their illness. It

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impacts to make a decision when they drive

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it is more comfortable for

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who have long hours of driving. Yet, they could have enough sleep and relax.

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higher innovation. So, the adolescents could learn a specific lesson that improves their skills.

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that higher technology lacks

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as they make a decision by using an algorithm that cannot aware

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sense.

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they do not trust in these.

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regular occupations which means the drivers will lose

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. An instance, in Thailand, most

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no other proficiency to find a new job. So, they would be unemployed. In conclusion, I strongly

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that the benefits of the new technology as 'driverless' would be more advantages than disadvantages.

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, we have to be concerned about the problems of the

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who were affected by the disruption.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

251 words

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In the future all cars ,buses and trucks will be driveless.The only people travalling inside these vehicles will be passengers . Do you think the advantages of driveless vehicle outweigh the disadvantages?

living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as parctical problems. to what extent do you agree or dis agree with this statement

Nowadays many elderly people live alone and this can cause a variety of problems for society. What are some of these problems and what solutions can you suggest?

Some children spend hours everyday on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation

You recently broke your leg and your colleagues from work sent you get well cards and presents. Write a letter to them and say •Thanks them for supporting you. •Describe how you spend your time. •Explain about your recovery process.