A large company in your area has decided to spend a certain amount of money, either to sponsor a local children's sports team for two years or to pay for two open-air concerts. It has asked for feedback from the general public. Write a letter to the company. In your letter: • describe the benefits of sponsoring the sports team • summaries the benefits of paying for the concerts • say how you think the company should spend the money

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter regarding the possibility of your company investment in our soccer
team
for the youth for two years or promoting two shows outdoors for the community. There are many positive impacts of investing in the local soccer
team
,
such
as the possibility of winning regional or even national championships, due to the hiring of more qualified professionals and improvements in the facilities.
In addition
, we have been looking for a sponsor for years, as their uniforms are in poor condition and the parents could not afford new ones.
Therefore
,
this
could allow you to promote your brand for years.
Nevertheless
, there are a few benefits in promoting the concerts, as it
also
helps to increase the visibility of your brand.
Besides
, the population would have an additional option of leisure in the city, which would be a good option for the ones who do not have cars.
However
, those benefits could be soon forgotten, as it would be only two punctual events. As you required public opinion, as a mother of an athlete and trainer of the
team
, I strongly believe sponsoring the
team
could bring excellent results and change their future, because they do have much potential.
Besides
, we already have three festivals a year in near cities, and the games
also
attract many people to cheer for our
team
, which increases our love for the city. I hope you make a better decision for the community. Yours sincerely, Mariana Borges
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