Succesful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
Sports
stars have a remarkably superior income than workers in other relevant professions. Some Use synonyms
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to be completely justified while others opine that Linking Words
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essay will analyze both points of view and explain why it agrees with the former rather than the latter.
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Sports
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sports
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from their fans. The fans are not forced to spend their Use synonyms
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thus
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sports
stars. There is a similar situation in others professions. Use synonyms
Nevertheless
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is willing to pay is significantly smaller. For ,example scientific research is extremely important ,especially in certain topics like health or climate change. They are almost entirely funded by governments and Use synonyms
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, by taxes. And citizens of a country are rarely willing to pay higher taxes to increase the scientist's salaries.
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stars that are only there to entertain us. Use synonyms
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people
think that Use synonyms
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However
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this
and they are not doing it. Linking Words
For instance
, they could donate Linking Words
money
to scientific research or ask for more funding for it.
To sum up, the problem with the substantial difference in income is, in my opinion, not a problem of fairness but a decision that Use synonyms
people
unconsciously do when they decide where to spend their Use synonyms
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