Online shopping is replacing shopping in stores. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

In contemporary society, we can purchase

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with mobile phones or

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which is particularly comfortable, very few people actually few that they need to visit the stores to experience the progress of consumption or scrutiny the quality of

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.

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, online shopping has become more prevalent than shopping offline.

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,

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trend has both positive and negative aspects indeed. The growing tendency of online shopping can be largely attributed to its convenience, both

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and money when compared to

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in-store shopping. In fact, consumers can select and purchase

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on

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, which save

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time

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for buyers

travel

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to the shops.

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, online shopping seems to provide

a lower prices

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a lower price

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mainly because the operation and management costs are lower than the store.

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is because online stores do not require a place to display the

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,

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, clothes and shoes.

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allows them to sell items for

a extremely cheap prices

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an extremely cheap price

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to the consumers.

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there

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an assortment of advantages of online shopping, inevitable drawbacks exist in the meanwhile.

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of all, the quality of products online may not be ensured. When individuals shop online, they are unable to see and touch the product they are buying.

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leads to a lot of bad businesses selling fake

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, due to the difficulty of examining online shopping, an increasing number of bad merchants tend to join the online platform.

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, citizens, especially those shopping enthusiasts are more likely to waste a huge amount of

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on searching and buying

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. The online stores could use advertisements to attract those peoples’ eyeballs, which will encourage them to waste

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and even buy something they really

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need. In conclusion, online shopping has both pros and cons. From my perspective, the positive aspects outweigh the negative aspects. People are gradually adapting

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kind of purchasing style, and the convenience and lower costs should not

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when people decide to buy

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online.