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A job application Cover letter You are applying for a job. As well as attaching a CV, you need to write a cover letter explaining your reasons for choosing this particular job at this particular company, and why you would be a good hire. Things to include are: – Possible qualifications or reasons for you to be hired – Your energy and enthusiasm for the job – Your past experience in a similar position.

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Dear sir, I am writing to express my enthusiasm to join MSi as a well-accredited and internationally recognized company. I have been working in an SSO firm as an IT specialist since 2015. In my current job, I am in charge of designing, setting up, and maintenance of a network of around 150 computers.
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, most of our network devices are CISCO and I have recently achieved my MCSA degree which is a requirement of your desired position.
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, I hold a software engineering degree from the University of Alberta which can be a positive point based on your plan to analyse, design and implement software to manage customers' cases. I am very excited to contribute to your team since I have learned that you are looking for a person who has both theoretical and practical experiences in terms of software development and information
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 maintenance. I hope my 10 years of IT experience
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 my academic education can be aligned well with your job requirements.
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, I have attached my CV for review. Please feel free to let me know if you need more information from me. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Zari Shamsa

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Consider elaborating on your energy and enthusiasm for the job more explicitly, perhaps by sharing what excites you about the specific role.
coherence and cohesion
Ensure there are no extra spaces within the text for a cleaner presentation. Additionally, consider breaking the content into smaller paragraphs for clarity.
coherence and cohesion
Well-structured with a clear opening, body, and closing. Each paragraph addresses relevant points effectively.
task achievement
You effectively highlighted both qualifications and experience, demonstrating a good match for the job.

Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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