CHILDREN SHOULD ALWAYS FOLLOW THEIR PARENTS’ ADVICE. TO WHAT EXTEND DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE WITH THIS STATEMENT

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to their
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of knowledge and
also
they depend on their
parents
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would like to keep my point on what
children
should always follow their
parents
advice. As all
children
are usually innocent and they lack knowledge in view of their surroundings it's good if they get their
parents
back as they would be protected even before the dangers which are created by the people in and around them say
for instance
most preschool and
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children
are often taught during childhood to play and share their favourite toys with their friends, to always be truthful, to treat others with respect to help people who are in need and so on.
This
in turn may make them caring, thoughtful, responsible and we'll mannered human beings. For
this
reason
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guidence
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guidance
is almost important to their
children
.
Also
when in during teenage
time
which is known to be worst phase of our
life
when will get into worst temptations and
also
get to meet up more temporary people is the
time
where we need to get
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advice
from
parents
because they are the best guides during our worst
time
as they will be knowing the
concequences
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consequences
for the particular action which they might have
suffured
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suffered
in past due to some mistake so that they will
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children
so that they can be protected from the
concequences
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consequences
which may occur later in
life
due to some insane temptations or activities.
Also
when
children
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to take
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decisions regarding their career or anything else that has a major impact
towards
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their
life
in
future
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children
needs to get
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advice to prevent untoward situations for which later they may have to suffer. But there are
also
few negative
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on
children
as always taking
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from
parents
can hinder their ability to think and act independently and they become
to
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dependent on
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.
This
may
also
lead to
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self confidence
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. To conclude my essay
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would strongly believe in getting
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advice
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from
parents
as it would make
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children
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life
easy going but at the same
time
I would like to conclude by writing that getting lots of
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from
parents
can
also
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children's
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ability to make
life
decisions on their own which would later be difficult to handle in absence of their
parents
.
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  • parental guidance
  • crucial
  • life lessons
  • best interests
  • life experience
  • understanding
  • challenges
  • invaluable
  • independence
  • critical thinking
  • relying solely
  • hinder
  • beliefs
  • desires
  • generational changes
  • rapid pace
  • social and technological changes
  • outdated
  • applicable
  • digital age
  • necessitating
  • balance
  • tradition
  • modernity
  • deeply ingrained
  • value
  • evolve
  • honoring
  • deviating
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