CHILDREN SHOULD ALWAYS FOLLOW THEIR PARENTS’ ADVICE. TO WHAT EXTEND DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE WITH THIS STATEMENT
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children
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back as they would be protected even before the dangers which are created by the people in and around them say for instance
most preschool and school age
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school-age
children
are often taught during childhood to play and share their favourite toys with their friends, to always be truthful, to treat others with respect to help people who are in need and so on. This
in turn may make them caring, thoughtful, responsible and we'll mannered human beings. For this
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children
. Also
when in during teenage time
which is known to be worst phase of our life
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because they are the best guides during our worst time
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consequences
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due to some insane temptations or activities.
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the future
children
needs to get parents
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their parents
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would strongly believe in getting Change the capitalization
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