some people believe that there should be fixed punishment for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for commiting it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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There is a heated
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debate
that has been sparked all over the world. It is claimed that a certain penalty is necessary for each type of
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.
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, some believe that there are some factors that should be considered before a decision of punishment
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as the situation of
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and the bravery of
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it. Not only these two ideas but
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my perspective will be mentioned in
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essay. On the one hand, the government should set a fixed punishment for every
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regardless
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ages
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or other factors especially, there is a victim.
For example
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, when the
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killed someone whether he
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not is necessary
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that situation since the victim
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.
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have to be punished for the bad thing they have done to others.
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, if there is no fixed penalty for every
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, there is
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no equality in
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world. What is more, the fraud will do the same
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again and again without insecurity. Most importantly, it may cause
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in death leading to
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society.
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, some
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suggest that some criminals are very young and they did crimes because of their
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trauma
in life.
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,
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said that eighty
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of serious criminals are grown up by
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storing
stealing
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other things or bullying other
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since they were young.
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, it would be equal when the judge
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consideration
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their circumstances and motivation for
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committing
their bad manners.
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is because the penalty would not be the same for every
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. It is undeniable fact that the
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have
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to stay
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jail
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at least for five years while the theft
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to stay at least one month. On top of that, if the criminal did it because of their
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trauma
or dark sides and it looks to repairable after taking some time, they should be sent to community services. To sum up, as far as I am concerned, there should be a fixed punishment for every
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and
also
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a consideration must be taken while making
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because the decision made in court can change
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people
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's life.
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