some people believe that there should be fixed punishment for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for commiting it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. discuss both these views and give your own opinion

There is a heated

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debate

that has been sparked all over the world. It is claimed that a certain penalty is necessary for each type of

crime

.

Nevertheless

, some believe that there are some factors that should be considered before a decision of punishment

such

as the situation of

crime

and the bravery of

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committing

it. Not only these two ideas but

also

my perspective will be mentioned in

this

essay. On the one hand, the government should set a fixed punishment for every

criminals

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regardless

their

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ages

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or other factors especially, there is a victim.

For example

, when the

murder

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killed someone whether he

commited

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committed

or

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not is necessary

at

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that situation since the victim

is already died

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.

People

have to be punished for the bad thing they have done to others.

In addition

, if there is no fixed penalty for every

crimes

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crime

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, there is

also

no equality in

this

world. What is more, the fraud will do the same

crime

again and again without insecurity. Most importantly, it may cause

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in death leading to

unpeaceful

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society.

On the other hand

, some

people

suggest that some criminals are very young and they did crimes because of their

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trauma

in life.

Moreover

,

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said that eighty

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of serious criminals are grown up by

stoling

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storing

stealing

stalling

other things or bullying other

people

since they were young.

Besides

, it would be equal when the judge

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consideration

about

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their circumstances and motivation for

commiting

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committing

their bad manners.

This

is because the penalty would not be the same for every

crimes

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crime

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. It is undeniable fact that the

murder

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have

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to stay

at

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jail

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the jail

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at least for five years while the theft

have

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to stay at least one month. On top of that, if the criminal did it because of their

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trauma

or dark sides and it looks to repairable after taking some time, they should be sent to community services. To sum up, as far as I am concerned, there should be a fixed punishment for every

crime

and

also

a consideration must be taken while making

decision

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because the decision made in court can change

the

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people

's life.