some people believe that there should be fixed punishment for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for commiting it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. discuss both these views and give your own opinion
There is a heated
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that has been sparked all over the world. It is claimed that a certain penalty is necessary for each type of Correct your spelling
debate
crime
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Nevertheless
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as the situation of Linking Words
crime
and the bravery of Use synonyms
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committing
also
my perspective will be mentioned in Linking Words
this
essay.
On the one hand, the government should set a fixed punishment for every Linking Words
criminals
regardless Change to a singular noun
criminal
their
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of their
ages
or other factors especially, there is a victim. Fix the agreement mistake
age
For example
, when the Linking Words
murder
killed someone whether he Replace the word
murderer
commited
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committed
or
not is necessary Correct pronoun usage
it or
at
that situation since the victim Change preposition
in
is already died
. Change to the active voice
already dies
has already died
People
have to be punished for the bad thing they have done to others. Use synonyms
In addition
, if there is no fixed penalty for every Linking Words
crimes
, there is Change to a singular noun
crime
also
no equality in Linking Words
this
world. What is more, the fraud will do the same Linking Words
crime
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the
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a
raise
in death leading to Correct your spelling
rise
unpeaceful
society.
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an unpeaceful
On the other hand
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people
suggest that some criminals are very young and they did crimes because of their Use synonyms
tranuma
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trauma
Moreover
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research
said that eighty Add an article
the research
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percent
percents
of serious criminals are grown up by Correct your spelling
per cent
stoling
other things or bullying other Correct your spelling
storing
stealing
stalling
people
since they were young. Use synonyms
Besides
, it would be equal when the judge Linking Words
take
consideration Change the verb form
takes
about
their circumstances and motivation for Change preposition
apply
commiting
their bad manners. Correct your spelling
committing
This
is because the penalty would not be the same for every Linking Words
crimes
. It is undeniable fact that the Change to a singular noun
crime
murder
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murderer
have
to stay Change the verb form
has
at
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in
jail
at least for five years while the theft Add an article
the jail
have
to stay at least one month. On top of that, if the criminal did it because of their Change the verb form
has
traunma
or dark sides and it looks to repairable after taking some time, they should be sent to community services.
To sum up, as far as I am concerned, there should be a fixed punishment for every Correct your spelling
trauma
crime
and Use synonyms
also
a consideration must be taken while making Linking Words
decision
because the decision made in court can change Add an article
a decision
the decision
the
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apply
people
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