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Students in school or university learn more from classes of teachers than other resources (e.g. Internet or TV), do you agree or disagree?

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In
this
 era of technological innovation, there are thousands of education sources on
internet
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the internet
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 or TV.
However
,
students
 in university or school prefer to learn only from
teachers
 compared to other resources. I totally disagree with
this
 idea and
this
 essay will point out some of my
perspective
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perspectives
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 with
revelant
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relevant
 reasons.
First
 of all, learning only from books and
teachers
 became a habit
to
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for
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 every student.
In addition
,the majority of
students
 rely on
teachers
 whether they have some difficulties with their lessons. In
this
 way, they
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loose
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lose
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 their self-esteem and confidence. What is more, they do not dare to study alone because they are afraid of making mistakes.
As a result
, they only know their
teachers
'
idea
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ideas
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 in a certain way. On the one hand, information from
internet
 websites and television include different ideas from different people.
Moreover
,
students
 can study themselves at their favourite time only if they have
internet
. There is no doubt that it can
also
 improve your
researching
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research
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 skill because children have to search everything on google
by
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on
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 their own.
Besides
, different types of questions related
with
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to
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 a certain topic can be
also
 learned as general
knowledges
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knowledge
pieces of knowledge
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. To sum up, as far as I am concerned, it would be a pity if
students
 are not using the
internet
 and television as educational platforms in
this
 century.
This
 is because they can bring details and
also
 improve
students
' technological skills.
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