By punishing murderers with the death penalty, society is also guilty of committing murder. Therefore, life in prison is a better punishment for murderers. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is argued that by punishing
murderers
with the death penalty, society is
also
guilty of committing murder.
Therefore
,
life
in prison is a better punishment for
murderers
.
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strongly agree with
this
topic, as the
murderers
are those
people
who
doesnot
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does not
doesn't
care or think once when taking a human's
life
, if
the
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society will
also
demand to do the same to them
then
is there any difference between
murderers
and normal
people
?.
To begin
with,
murderers
are the individuals who are ill in their
mind
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to create and spread violence and fear in the
world
. According to some research these mentally retarded
people
gain satisfaction in some way when taking someone's
life
, they enjoy that moment and some are so ahead of the line which
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the sane from insane, they get addicted to that feeling and continues to spread terror in the
world
to achieve pleasure.
However
, these
type
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of criminals should not be given the death penalty because it will give them an easy way out of the
world
. They should be kept in jail for
their
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rest of
the
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lives so that they can feel the pain and torment for what they did and it will
also
create
the
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example for other violent individuals who think of crossing the line of sanity and
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such
crimes, they should know what will happen for rest of their miserable lives if they are willing to cross that line.
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conclusion, these criminals should rot in jail cells for their remaining
life
in despair so that it will create
such
an example for the whole society that even by thinking of their situation, one will have fear in mind for not committing
such
serious crimes. Ultimately
this
will keep peace around the
world
and will discourage
the
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people
for
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doing
such
inhuman crimes.
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