Countries with a long average working time are more economically successful than those countries which do not have a long working time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Numerous international experts share controversy of the pro and con side of long working
hours
. It is true that long labour times contributed to international economic growth, but it is
also
harmful to life quality and human rights.
To begin
, the term "dying from the workplace" is so common social issue in today's society. "
Kiroshi
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Hiroshi
" is the term of to work oneself to death from Japan, because they have the highest death rates from the workplace over a decade. According to the Japanese labour association in 2009, the research approved long working
hours
can cause chronic diseases,
such
as carpal tunnel syndrome, heart attack, and stock.
Moreover
, long working
hours
without free time or social interactions could cause suicide from depression. Despite the country having great economic growth with contribution from people's hard and long working
hours
, it has been destroying each individual.
Therefore
, Some experts claimed that concentration doesn't rely on long-working
hours
. During the research, they counted the
hours
of human brain concentration, which is only 1
hour
or less
as a result
.
In other words
, long-working
hours
do not guarantee a practical labour environment. Referring to my personal experiences, My office invested in a flexible working time system, which is reduced by 7
hours
from 9
hours
a day. At the end of the experiment, I had done more tasks than long working
hours
. As result, people can focus on their work regardless of the long working
hour
. After flexible office
hour
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, all employees gain more motivation and stable working conditions. In the conclusion, many research and experts already approved that the long-labour
hour
does not support an efficient working environment, but can cause various chronic diseases. So I disagree that long working
hours
can make the state more economically competitive.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • economic success
  • working hours
  • productivity
  • sustainable development
  • work-life balance
  • labor laws
  • efficiency
  • gross domestic product (GDP)
  • burnout
  • occupational health
  • technological innovation
  • industrialized nations
  • emerging economies
  • workforce
  • competitiveness
  • workplace culture
  • employee turnover
  • quality of life
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