You are having a graduation party next Sunday evening. You have invited over 25 people to celebrate in your garden, which may continue late into the night. Write a letter to the Chairman of the Housing Society. In your letter: Explain what will be happening Offer your apologies in advance Invite him to join the celebration

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Dear Mr Prakash, I am writing

this

letter to inform you about the party which is going to be held on Saturday. I am seeking permission to celebrate the moments with my friends. I have invited my college friends to participate in these memorable moments of my life. I have arranged a music band, food and drinks to share with my peers.

This

party will

last

after midnight. They will be loud music and noise around in the society. I am really sorry about it because after a long time we got an opportunity to cherish these moments. We are very excited to pursue a master's education in the future. We do not want to miss

this

opportunity. I cordially invite you and your family to

this

special occasion of my life. Please be a part of it. Your presence will be highly appreciated. I would be awaiting a positive reply from your end. Yours Sincerely, Mohammed Idris.

Submitted by mohammed.idris7860311 on Fri Mar 18 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

158 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

significant milestone
personal achievement
celebration
attendees
venue
advance apologies
inconvenience
noise level
parking arrangements
warm invitation
festivities
get to know
minimize disruption
considerate parking
neighborhood harmony

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