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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research,business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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Some individuals believe that
information
 sharing in different subjects is a beneficial activity, while others think that some specific kind of
information
 is not suitable for sharing.
This
 essay will discuss both
ideas
, and I will give my opinion in the end.
First
 of all, sharing is a natural part of
information
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the information
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, because most of the
information
 is useless without sharing.
Firstly
, for
the
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medical science sharing and discussing
about
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new
ideas
 are quite important. If a scientific team does not share the results of their study,
this
information
 will not have any practical meaning and cannot be used.
Secondly
, in
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business
businness
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sector
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 if employees do not share their
ideas
 continuously with each other there will be no progression in the company.
Moreover
, by sharing
information
 the missing parts can be spotted better.
This
 is because, when a new idea is shared, people tend to criticize it and find soft spots on it.
As a result
, after their comments, the
information
 can be shaped better.
Furthermore
, sharing
an
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information
 can be inspiring for
the
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others.
For instance
, in science, the best way of creating new
ideas
 is
reading
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 published articles.
However
, there are
some
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certain types of
information
which
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that
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 are not good candidates for free sharing.
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Firs
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 of all, sharing the secret
information
 of people is quite dangerous. It can hurt someone or cause problems between people.
Aslo
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Also
,
information
 related to
security
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 of governments should not be shared with anybody, because
this
 can cause significant threats like terror attacks or wars. In conclusion, sharing
information
 is a quite debated subject. Some believe that no restrictions are needed related to
information
 sharing, while others believe that sharing certain types of
information
 should be restricted. In my opinion, except
personal
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 or
security related
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information
, all types of
information
 should be shared freely, because
this
 will improve and alter the
information
 shared.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • information sharing
  • scientific research
  • business
  • academic world
  • advancement of knowledge
  • progress
  • collaboration
  • cross-disciplinary research
  • open access
  • democratization of information
  • transparency
  • credibility
  • intellectual property
  • security concerns
  • commercial interests
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