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Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Some people may argue that University admission for each subject should be equally distributed among both sexes.
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, since university admission should be dependent on the performance of the
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 and their preferences,
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 writer would completely disagree with the given notion.
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 with, when we consider the higher
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 of a country ,it will lead to development as well as the popularity of that nation in the world .
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 , since it is a very sensitive subject among the general population , the entry criteria should be based on the performance of the
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 rather than other criteria like sex or money. If someone violates
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 principle due to various reasons , it will affect the quality of higher
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 as well as its international acceptance . To illustrate
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, Higher
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 in Afghanistan is not accepted by many western countries since it provides only to male
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. At the same time , even though we like to give equal chances to each sex , some categories of higher
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 are accepted only by the
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 of a particular sex.
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 may be due to many reasons like considering future working environments and social acceptance of the job .
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 , most girls do not like to do higher studies like engineering since they do not prefer to work in machinery or building construction fields in the future .
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 , most boys do not like to study nursing for their higher studies since society think that nursing has belonged to females. In conclusion , even though there are some growing arguments about distributing university entry equally among both sexes, it is unacceptable because higher
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 should only depend on the qualification and the preference of the applicant .
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 ,
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 writer is in complete disagreement with the above-mentioned notion.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • gender diversity
  • fostering innovation
  • educational experience
  • enforcing gender quotas
  • merit and potential
  • individual achievements
  • natural differences
  • gender equality
  • reducing gender stereotypes
  • balanced workforce
  • traditionally male-dominated or female-dominated fields
  • fluctuating applicant numbers
  • compromise on quality
  • diversity aspects
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