An increasing number of professionals such as doctors and teachers are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause? What can be done to deal with this situation?

It can not be denied that many people are planning to move to a more civilized country. Over the recent years, many professional workers

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as doctors and teachers have moved from undeveloped

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in

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developed

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. In the following paragraph, the causes and the solutions of

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issue will be outlined more in

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. The moving of professionals is caused by many reasons. One of the major reasons is the

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that they received.

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, in

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the annual

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that the teacher received is not enough for one to have a good quality

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. People did not give

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much interest in these

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fields and looked down

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these jobs. According to

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problem, causing people who

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in these jobs did not have

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professional skills which leads to a low

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. As well as for doctors, they have worked very hard for

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very low

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in return. Some doctors need to

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for over 24 hours for one slot causing them to find a better chance in their career. To tackle

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these problems, there are several things that government could do.

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, they should have given more importance to these careers by paying them more. Students are the

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generation who will develop the

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so if they have been taught by a qualified teacher, it would be a huge change to the educational system in the undeveloped

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.

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, they should have been

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for

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appropriate working hours. According to the information mentioned above, it can be concluded that the

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and workload of these professional workers is the cause of that they are leaving to

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developed

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, and the government should cooperate to reconsidered these working criteria of these jobs before good workers are all gone.