You are shifting out of your accommodation. You think th eplace is suitable for your English-speaking colleague who is arriving next month. Write a letter to you colleague -explain why you are shifting out - Describe your accommodation -Why is it suitable for your friend

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Hi Sam, I’m writing you

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letter to tell you that I’m moving out

from

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my flat in Beirut to the mountain. I thought about you that it’ll be perfect to rent it for its location and

neighborhood

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. As you know, I’m opening my new

center

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Shouf

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the Shouf

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area

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week. The interior design has already

finished

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, but we’re organizing the filing and cleaning the rooms. Since the fuel isn’t available all the time, I’ve decided to relocate and stay near the

center

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. The home is in a building of 10 floors, taking you only 5 minutes from the airport, and 5 minutes from the city

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. It’s a small apartment of 2 bedrooms, 1 living room, a small kitchenette, and a wc, on the 4th floor. I think you’d like it since it has

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big parking for your 4wd truck. Don’t forget the

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that are mostly Europeans which is the best option for you to live in your comfort zone. And

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, it’s only 5 minutes walking to your work if you want to, or on

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. Can’t wait to see you, All the luck, Zein

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

189 words

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The Closing

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