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Caring for children is probably the most important job in any society. Because of this, all mothers and fathers should be required to take a course that prepares them to be good parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

#children #job #society #mothers #fathers #course #parents
It is a crucial part of
parents
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life
 , is
child rearing
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 practice in
proper
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a proper
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 way. Due to the fact of being
good
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parent
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parents
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, they might take a
course
 to be prepared before taking
child
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the child
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 .I firmly agree with
this
 point of view because of some reasons. There
are
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 a wide range of causes why I agree with
this
 statement .
First
 of all ,
parents
 need to know the best way of
child
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a child
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 growing up practice . To be more precise , every
parent's
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parent
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 might not have enough knowledge about
child
 development which is essential for
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a child
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child
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child's
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life
. Take an example , a growing up
child
 might
be mentally disable
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 if he or she does not get
approprite
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appropriate
 take care in
first
 five years of
life
 .
Secondly
 , some
parents
 have
not
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no
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 ideas about
child
 rights .
As a result
 ,
those
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that child
those children
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child
 might
be lose
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 some parts of
life
 , like malnutrition effects ,
for example
 .
Moreover
, by doing courses ,
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a caregiver
the caregiver
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caregiver
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caregivers
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 can gather knowledge about
child
 care practice . They can know about giving chance a
child
 to take
small
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a small
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decision
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decisions
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.
Such
 as
choose
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choosing
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 dress or food for
them selves
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themselves
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 which will make them independent .
Furthermore
, taking a
course
 , they can know which toys
in
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is
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 important for children according to their age. To be more clear , when
parent
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parents
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give
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 chess to
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a child
the child
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child
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children
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 for entertainment as toys , the younger might be able
think
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to think
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 quickly with
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a problem
the problem
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problem - solving
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problem-solving
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 skills . To sum up , to be
a good
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a good parent
good parents
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parents
 , people should do
course
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courses
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 for acquiring knowledge about
child
 development . To take essential steps for toddler's in their early
life
 ,
course
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the course
a course
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 might play
vital
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a vital
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 role in
parents
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a parents
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life
 , to make children more
skill ful
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skilful
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 and
self dependent
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self-dependent
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.
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