Caring for children is probably the most important job in any society. Because of this, all mothers and fathers should be required to take a course that prepares them to be good parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

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, they might take a

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.I firmly agree with

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a wide range of causes why I agree with

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statement .

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of all ,

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need to know the best way of

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growing up practice . To be more precise , every

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might not have enough knowledge about

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development which is essential for

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life

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if he or she does not get

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appropriate

take care in

first

five years of

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, some

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ideas about

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rights .

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,

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be lose

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some parts of

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for example

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, by doing courses ,

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can gather knowledge about

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care practice . They can know about giving chance a

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to take

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decision

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as

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dress or food for

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which will make them independent .

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, taking a

course

, they can know which toys

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important for children according to their age. To be more clear , when

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give

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chess to

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for entertainment as toys , the younger might be able

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quickly with

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problem - solving

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skills . To sum up , to be

a good

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a good parent

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, people should do

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for acquiring knowledge about

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development . To take essential steps for toddler's in their early

life

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might play

vital

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role in

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life

, to make children more

skill ful

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and

self dependent

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.