Fast food is now universally in most countries and is becoming increasingly popular. Some feel that this is a positive trend, while others do not. What are your opinions in this?
It can not be denied that over
the
recent years the popularity of fast Correct article usage
apply
food
had increased rapidly. Some Use synonyms
people
say that the Use synonyms
increasing
of fast Replace the word
increase
food
Use synonyms
trend
seems to be Use synonyms
an
good Change the article
a
trend
. Use synonyms
However
, in my opinion, I believe that it seems to be a negative Linking Words
trend
more than a positive Use synonyms
trend
. In the following paragraph, my opinions will be discussed more in detail before the conclusion is reached.
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Firstly
, when we Linking Words
referring
to fast Wrong verb form
refer
food
, the Use synonyms
first
type of Linking Words
food
that Use synonyms
usually
Add a missing verb
is usually
be remind
of is Change the verb form
be reminded
the
junk Correct article usage
apply
food
. As we all know, junk Use synonyms
food
is Use synonyms
a processed
Remove the article
processed food
a portion of processed food
food
. It includes additive, preservative and Use synonyms
also
msg which might result to Linking Words
a
bad health in our long term life. Remove the article
apply
For instance
, Linking Words
people
taking junk Use synonyms
food
usually had a higher chance to have a result Use synonyms
for
high blood pressure, Change preposition
of
cholestorol
or even cancer Correct your spelling
cholesterol
comparing
to Change the form of the verb
compared
people
eating Use synonyms
a clean
Remove the article
clean food
a portion of clean food
food
. Use synonyms
Futhermore
, fast Correct your spelling
Furthermore
food
usually Use synonyms
cause
Change the verb form
causes
people
to gain weight as it is salty and is full of unhealthy fats.
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Secondly
, the cleanliness and quality of fast Linking Words
food
. When we are able to cook Use synonyms
for
our own, we will keep our Change preposition
on
food
clean and fresh as much as possible. Use synonyms
However
fast Linking Words
food
Use synonyms
restuarant
do not usually control Correct your spelling
restaurant
restaurants
their
cleanliness and quality of their Change the word
the
food
. Use synonyms
For instance
, Linking Words
Thailand
, fresh Change preposition
in Thailand
food
are Use synonyms
under
hot weather without ice to keep it chill. Many Change preposition
in
people
got Use synonyms
diarrea
from taking Correct your spelling
diarrhoea
these rotten
Change the determiner
this rotten food
food
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, there might be mice or Linking Words
cockroah
in these fast Correct your spelling
cockroach
cockroaches
food
Use synonyms
restuarant
which is really unhealthy for a person to eat as it might cause Correct your spelling
restaurant
food
poisoning to the consumer.
In conclusion, Use synonyms
although
fast Linking Words
food
is fast, delicious and cheap, Use synonyms
but
when we compare Remove the conjunction
apply
to
our health in both Correct pronoun usage
it to
short
term and long term, taking clean Correct article usage
the short
food
that might take a longer time on your break or cost a little more would Use synonyms
result
a better life in the future.Add the preposition
inresult
fromresult
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