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When children start school teachers have a bigger influence on their academic and social development compared to their parents. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your opinion and relevant examples

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Both
parents
 and
teachers
 play an instrumental role in shaping the academic and social development of a child. In
this
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 I will be discussing why I tend to believe young
children
 are influenced by their
teachers
 more than their
parents
.
To begin
 with,
children
 spent most of their day at
school
,
Therefore
 ,
this
 allows
teachers
 to have a great influence on their pupils.
For example
 , in CANADA
children
 are in
school
 from 7 in the morning till 2 in the afternoon and during these ,houres
children
 are learning academic and non-academic subjects
such
 as art and music. A recent study that was conducted in THE UK showed that
children
 from age 4 to 7 mostly are influenced by their teacher's behaviours.
Moreover
,
children
 in
school
 learn various social skills through interacting with their
teachers
 and peers,
such
 as active listening , effective communication and much more.
Furthermore
. We live in an era wherein most households both
parents
 are working in order to provide better opportunities for their offspring. And because of ,that the only quality time that
children
 can spend with their
parents
 are either on holidays or weekends. A survey that was done in THE UNITED STATE showed that in 7 out of 10
in
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US households both
parents
 are working. In conclusion , early
school
 age is where
children
 are in their acquisition period and due to the fact that they are spending the majority of their time in ,schools which makes sense that they will be influenced more by their
teachers
.
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