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Some people think that robots are important for humans’ future development. Other think that robot have negative effects on society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Some
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 would argue that
robots
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 are imperative for the future and enable
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 to save more
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, some think
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 negatively impact society and make
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 less social.
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 may have made
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 technology-dependent, I believe that the quality of
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 will improve and be error-free with robotics. On the one hand, using robotic technology,
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 become more dependent on machines and lazy.
People
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 spend more
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 watching TV or browsing the internet rather than doing their day-to-day
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 as
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work
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 for them like a robot vacuum cleaner.
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,
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 become more reclusive, less social, and lazy and will potentially get into several health concerns
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 as obesity and overweight related health diseases.
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, some
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 believe that
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 enable
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 to
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 effectively and provide error-free results.
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 are programmed which minimize the errors humans usually can make. That degree of error can be minimal, like a typo error or massive during some surgeries, which can be fatal. In my opinion, I agree with
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 viewpoint as
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 minimize mistakes;
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, one can save
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 and energy to rectify the error.
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, recent research found that humans perform some surgical procedures that take 5-8 hours; when experimented with
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, scientists found a reduction in
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 by 1-2 hours with almost zero errors. In conclusion,
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robots
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 make
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 lazy and less social, I believe
robots
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 save
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 and minimize human errors;
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, they are beneficial for the future.
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