It is as important to teach children to protect the environment as it is to teach them to read and write. To what extent do you agree with this statement? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is generally acknowledged by certain individuals that teaching
children
how to protect the environment is as essential as teaching them to be literate. Regarding
this
, I do not agree with
this
assertion since I believe that learning how to read and write is more important than learning
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environmental protection.
Firstly
, if students learn reading
skill
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and writing
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as fast as possible, they can be prevalent others in education as they can read more books than other ones. Since reading
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children
to grow to be patient and knowledgeable, it affects their grades in the future.
For example
, a recent media in Korea reports that almost 30% of students who learned to be literate at an early age tend to gain higher grades than others because they have read more books.
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, teaching kids to read and write plays a key factor in getting
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school.
Secondly
,
children
can learn another language after they finish to learn mother tongue, thereby leading to be hired by an
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employer
employee
in
this
competitive society. As Kids are easily feel confused when they learn several
launguages
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languages
at the same time, so it is a good idea that they learn their own language
first
,and
then
learn others.
Therefore
, as they learn quickly, they can have more chances to learn other languages. What is more, due to globalization, a significant number of companies prefer to employ multi
lingualists
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linguists
dealing with foreigners.
Hence
, it is reasonable to say that learning reading and writing is an efficient means of working at a global company. In conclusion, as skills to read and write affects
children
's grades and future occupation, there is no doubt to point out that learning them is more valuable for their future than learning how to protect
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