Environmental damage is a problem in most countries. What is the cause of this damage? What should be done about this problem?
Nowadays many countries are chasing conflicts
due to
ecological damage which is occurring due to
the abundant use of fossil fuels, accumulation of population and cutting down of forests and this
can be addressed through the implementation of the following approaches.
To begin
with, societies’ indulgence in facilities working with Fossil fuels has led to numerous problems pollution being the first and foremost of them. With people increasing the use of personal vehicles and exacerbating the car exhaust in the air, in addition
to rising industrial demand, a great volume of CO2 is being emitted, prior to environmental pollution and damage. Consequently
, a worldwide decline in biodiversity is anticipated. For instance
, British ecologists recorded a massive accumulation of wildfires in several regions last
summer due to
the rising amount of CO2 in the air killing a wide range of native animals.
Moreover
, contamination of the environment doubled with overpopulation and mass civilization in forests is leading to deforestation of these areas. As a result
, there would be less number of plants to sequester CO2 from the air, bettering the contamination. Therefore
, the government should dedicate considerable resources to designing systems for absorbing and controlling CO2 emissions. Consequently
, countries suffering from economic conflicts would find it laborious to tackle this
issue. To cite an example, Iranian authorities declared the destruction of two lush jungles in northern cities of Iran due to
a lack of adequate facilities to combat ecological disasters.
Although
these problems require worldwide contribution, each country can take steps to better the situation. Firstly
, governments can implement taxes on the daily use of personal vehicles and improve mass public transportation accessibility and capacity. To illustrate, American governors allocated significant budgets for improving underground transportation which led to less usage of personal ones. Secondly
, in order to lessen deforestation, nations should house themselves far from endangered areas to prevent the loss of flora and fauna.
To conclude
, both the nation and the authorities are being faced with obstacles due to
environmental damage. However
, it can be tackled by implementing strict rules on transportation and human habituation.Submitted by tejanavyapc2000 on
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task achievement
Ensure a clear stance throughout the essay and avoid any ambiguity by addressing the cause of the problems and the solutions separately and clearly.
coherence cohesion
Use cohesive devices appropriately to link ideas within and between paragraphs effectively. Avoid excessive or forced cohesion that may seem unnatural.
coherence cohesion
Develop paragraphs uniformly by expanding on examples and connecting them directly back to the main idea of each paragraph.
coherence cohesion
Work on clear paragraphing, making sure each paragraph has a clear central topic that is developed coherently.
task achievement
Give precise and relevant examples to support your points, ensuring to explain how they relate to the topic directly.
task achievement
Have a clear conclusion that effectively summarizes the essay's stance on the causes and solutions for environmental damage, distinct from the introduction.
Answer the 'Problem and Solution' topic
Problem-and-solution essays fall naturally into two parts, the first describing and exploring the problem, the second setting out the solution or solutions.
You essay structure should look something like this:
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – Problems
- Body paragraph 2 – Solutions
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- One of the first problems of the...
- Another problem that needs to be considered...
- A possible solution to this problem would be...
- One immediate practical solution is to...