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The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#people #health #future
Nowadays,
people
 have long working hours and depression from different ways,
for example
, study, workload, high living costs, and estate mortgage. It may be some reasons led to rang of the standard of civil’s
health
 is almost to be decreasing in the future than it is now. I could say I have both sides to discuss in
this
 essay. On the one side,
health
 problems cause higher workload and depression from living costs raise up
that is
 no doubt to say, in
this
 commercial society
people
 keep working inefficiently
that is
 very important, they earn money to support their loan from housing and essential things. That will damage their physical mental and growth the
health
 crisis. If
people
 learn to balance their life, spend some time to relax like doing sports and take vacations to switch off the brain keep running in work, I believe that could be a good way to help humans
health
. On another side, in recent years the medical systems are advancing,
people
 are living longer than before. Many counties provided are good medicines and operations it could solve many diseases and viruses.
In addition
, some
people
 are eating supplements and different healthy diet habits,
for instance
, vegetarian and no carbohydrate.
People
 know that having a good healthy body is one of
reasons
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the reasons
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 to support their family and work. In conclusion,
people
 could understand how to balance between stress and relaxing, through sport exercises, choosing food, holidays break to refine their body.
Although
people
 are busy with work and others, we are under a good medical system and technology inventing that we don’t worry about that difficult to keep a healthy body in the future.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • 1. Standard of health
  • 2. Average
  • 3. Lower
  • 4. Future
  • 5. Aging population
  • 6. Chronic diseases
  • 7. Sedentary lifestyle
  • 8. Lack of exercise
  • 9. Poor dietary habits
  • 10. Environmental pollution
  • 11. Technological advancements
  • 12. Impact on health
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