Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, the increasing numbers of

plants

and animals’ extinction become our main environmental problem while others believed that there are some more important environmental issues that we should consider. Personally, I am inclined to the view that the preservation of

species

is more crucial. On the one hand,

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of conserving the

species

of

plants

and animals is they are the major

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to food resources that we, as a human consume daily.

In other words

, it is the cycle of life of predator and prey where if there are no

plants

for animals to eat

then

humans will not have livestock.

For instance

, sunflower is the main meal of cows and if the sunflower has been demolished, cows would lose their nutrition and

as a

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meat will be scarce due to the unhealthy cows.

Therefore

, the longer they live, the less chance of us facing food scarcity

On the other hand

, other natural hazards

such

as air pollution, floods, deforestation and climate change can be more severe than the loss of

species

.

This

is because it happened in our daily life

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and may provide the closest

disrupt

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in the way of living and most important there was more frequent to occur. As in the

real life

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example,

tsunami

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, caused by a volcanic eruption and soil erosion, can take many lives including

plants

all at once and within a few minutes. Another example, air pollution has severely affected Thai people due to the higher number of vehicles that caused traffic congestion.

This

means exhaust fumes emitted from those cars has resulted in people suffering from lung cancer and eventually reflected

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the growing

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number of deaths.

Thus

, there is no minority of other environmental problems. In conclusion, we should take into

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account to

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the preservation

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of those animals and

plants

, and forbid

such

action that can cause the loss of

species

since they were the only reason we still survive

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on

this

planet.