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Social Media has helped us increase our virtual networks. This has isolated us physically, making us socially awkward in person. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#media #networks #person
With
ever changing
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 advancements in technology, social
media
 has become a core part
in
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 our mundane. A normal teenager
spend
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 around 6-8 hours a day on social
media
.
This
 affects us all in different ways as we lose
tough
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touch
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 with our humanity and forget social norms,
thus
 making us less amicable than ever. Kids these days tend to act awkward among social
gathering
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 as they have lost touch
of
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 how to interact. I agree
to
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 the above statement as expounded below. To commence with, we, as humans, are social animals. Without interaction or communication or social
catch ups
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, we can not exist.
Advent
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 of social
media
 got us closer to
people
 sitting miles away but
also
 took us
further
 from friends and family who live in the vicinity.
Therefore
, Kids these days rather stay in than go out. On a latent note,
agorophobia
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agoraphobia
 might be emerging among these children or
people
 which is a state of a person actually fearing going out and
see
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 other
people
.
Furthermore
, What we need to understand is social
media
 has been designed to be addictive and
hence
 we should set some boundaries for ourselves to
make
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 some time for ourselves and our loved ones, just so we would not lose touch with who we are. To recapitulate what has been iterated above,
people
 and children are driven by social
media
 which made them restricted to more congenial life experiences and do something enthralling.
This
 may allow them to explore life and live exhilarating moments as they are intended to.
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