Some people think that social networking sites have a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Today, we are living in a world that has
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for all kinds of subjects.
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using a social networking
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is one of the
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to access many pieces of information and interact with others,
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as Facebook, Instagram, Twitter, etc.
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few
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are considering a huge negative impact on individuals and
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. In
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why a social networking
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became a bad influence on today's
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.
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, a social networking
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can easily spread false information.
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, There was
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incident on Facebook years ago. It was about a speech from the president of the USA, it was an urgent announcement about a nuclear bomb. After that announcement, it's become a popular topic on all social media. later that day, the official US
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announced that it was fake
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from some infamous hackers. Referring to
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incident, social
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is too easy to access to fool
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's minds.
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, a social networking
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could build escapism from reality. Most
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in social networking sites interact with others through a text or direct message system. It is so well designed to meet new someone, which is leading
people
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to refuse to meet
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in real-life. In conclusion,
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a social networking
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is one of the convenient tools to access information and meet others, it's too risky for individuals and
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without control. So I surely agree with the idea that a social networking
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can be a bad influence on today's
society
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • social isolation
  • virtual interactions
  • mental health
  • feelings of inadequacy
  • anxiety
  • depression
  • misinformation
  • destabilize
  • privacy concerns
  • data breaches
  • productivity
  • foster connections
  • educational content
  • social activism
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