Many people now undertake extreme activities , from hang-gliding to mountain climbing. Why do people risk their lives in this way, and do you think this is a good trend?

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still be numerously extra activities invented according to

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of exciting experiences in a human who prefers precarious pursuits. In

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trend to be popular. Since boring routine of consistent works and toxic society are actually worse circumstances which most people cannot avoid in daily life. So, attending some extreme activities perhaps creates a contended period to heal themselves from unsatisfied occurrences. For the

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example, risky experiences

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as jumping from

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building, walking above

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bridge, etc. distinctly tend to provide hormones of happiness that positively encourages consumers to take out their existing stresses.

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, it seems to hardly reject those currently tremendous pursuits

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of health because, at least, these experiences directly accelerate heart-rating faster and

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distribute a whole body to become stronger. While it may correct that feeling excessively exude excited should be considered as a root to activate a severe disease regarding

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heart. It still appears to be the case,

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, that equipment is always proved a

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before they have been released to service clients.

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, there are already various cautions to prepare

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. The examples can be seen in introductions from trained

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and warning boards. In conclusion, extreme exercises obviously

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around the world as a

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factor for

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because of many advantages,

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as

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sports, hobbies, etc.

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, it states that risk invented by creativity with maximum safety might be the one path of solutions for humanity to relax and contribute themselves if they can apply correctly and suitably.