In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

Some people insist that
driver
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in cars, buses and trucks will disappear in near future. The only passengers in cars will remain unchanged.
However
, others argue that the
driver
still will be existed
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many reasons. Elaborating my viewpoint of
this
matter,
driverless
is more advantageous because
automatic
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driving ability is needed in our society. Initiating with the best possible benefits, the most significant advantage is that there is no driving fatigue for drivers. The drivers can freely use their own time
such
as taking a nap, reading a book, and doing some work
instead
of driving.
Nevertheless
of drinking alcohol, they are capable of abiding by traffic
regulation
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.
As a result
, driving with no
driver
can produce a wide variety of merits in our modern society. On the paradoxical side, there are many drawbacks as well.
First
and foremost, since the level of
driverless
skills is not perfect at
this
moment so the chance of accidents
are
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still existed.
Furthermore
, malfunctions and
cyber attacks
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in computer systems are
the
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of the main disadvantages while
driverless
driving.
In addition
, there would be
a moral risks
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all the time when the
driver
and
manufacture
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have a conflict about the accident.
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subsequent result of
this
is that automatic driving is highly likely to be at
premature
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stage. To conclude, without any doubt,
this
idea has pros and cons. I firmly claim that
driverless
is necessary indeed in our complex area. As
the
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science develops rapidly nowadays, especially the development in
automotive
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the automotive
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industry grows fast as well so we need to take
a
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deep consideration of the possible risks resulting from
driverless
. We should find a better idea or method to use
this
technology to make our driving more comfortable and safer.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • driverless vehicles
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • increased safety
  • reduced traffic congestion
  • improved efficiency
  • accessibility
  • disabled
  • elderly
  • job displacement
  • privacy concerns
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