Some sports are extremely dangerous but many people still like them very much.why do people take part in these dangerous sports? Give some suggestions on how to deal with these dangers

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A huge wave of joy washed over me as I stood at
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of the theme park. It was a sunny day and the
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stimulus I perceived was the bright sunshine that hurt my eyes like a spear, as my eyes tried to focus. High above me, the sky seemed unreal, too blue to be true and only smudges of clouds still hung on to
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perfect canvas of summer. Inside me, I felt
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as if a ball of excitement started to grow larger, as I advanced
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into
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deep jungle of joy and all I could do was
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suppress my desire to scream. The
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thing that got my attention was the countless rails of
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above my head, mysterious and dangerous like venomous snakes hiding high above the trees. In the distance, a faint bell ring announced the start signal of a courage test. Only seconds after the start signal, the
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passed with windy speed on one of the rails, which was followed by an around of screaming and shouting. For me, the shouts were too high and passed too quickly to make out any
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though they seemed to mock me and my puny efforts to suppress my excitement
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while sending out invitations for me to join them. The
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thing that came to my attention was the numerous people around me. At the entrance to the
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, the whole city seemed to be gathered around there. Among all the visitors, some of them were vociferous teenagers who leaned back lazily at the fence. Their faces were turned upwards and they seemed to wish with their whole heart that they are the
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on the
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right now.
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back, groups of smaller children in brightly coloured clothes shrieked as each round of
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passed above them, their excitement swelled beyond the boundary of control, and their parents tried their best to hush them with a sharp hissing sound.
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down the road, I encountered a candy stall. The dirty reds and greens of decorations clashed with the ocean of pink and white on the counter and the dense smell of sweetness hung onto the air like waterdrops on windows in a cold morning. As soon as I walked past it, I was greeted by the sweet smell of artificial
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and crystalized sugar. It was a smell of dreams and happiness, which reminded me
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time when getting a candy floss was just like being in heaven as a child. Suddenly, I heard someone calling my name. Turning my head around, I saw my friends and they were waving their hands like crazy. I bloomed into a smile and walked quickly toward them.
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